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Technically this isn't my first piece of SGA-fic, but since the first piece looks like it's going to eat what little remains of my life, I thought I'd post this one first. I was watching 'Rising' and wondered how Rodney ended up in Antarctica. And when I wonder, I write...

Concrit welcomed and appreciated. Cross-posted to [livejournal.com profile] sga_noticeboard.



Title: First Contact
Author: [livejournal.com profile] jadesfire2808
Words: ~2,100
Characters: Elizabeth, Rodney
Rating/Warnings: Gen/none
Spoilers: Set pre-Season 1, so none.

With huge thanks to [livejournal.com profile] donutsweeper, [livejournal.com profile] miss_zedem and [livejournal.com profile] crystalshard who've been holding my hand and prodding me. Much appreciated.

Summary: Elizabeth knows what she wants.



First Contact


Area 51 could probably teach the SGC a thing or two about security. Elizabeth's papers and pass were checked four times before she even got in sight of the main facility, not to mention the scrutiny of more guards than she cared to count. The glaring didn't get to her, nor did the fingerprint and iris scans that she was subjected to before she was allowed to enter the building. They had good reason to be paranoid.

Once inside, she'd hoped to get a look at the legendary base, only to find that she was escorted to something that looked suspiciously like an interrogation room. The heat from outside seemed to have penetrated even to here, and she could almost feel it rolling off the grey concrete walls. It was not, she decided, an auspicious start.

"If you'd like to wait here, ma'am," her escort said, politely. "I'm sure he won't be long."

"Thank you." She started a little as the door slammed shut, then took a deep, calming breath. Laying her attaché case on the small, square table, she debated for a moment before taking off her suit jacket and hanging it neatly on the back of one of the chairs. After another moment's thought, and an experimental nudge, she pushed the table against the wall, arranging the two chairs so that they were within arm's reach of it, facing each other. It didn't do much to lessen the oppressive atmosphere, but hopefully she'd look less like an interrogator this way. Then she sat down, opening the case and pulling out the files inside.

She was rereading the third file for the fourth time when she heard the sound of someone talking in the corridor. Although the thickness of the walls and doors meant that making out individual words was impossible, she thought she could detect a definite tone of annoyance in the constant stream of words. Smiling to herself, she tucked the files away again and got to her feet as the door opened.

"…completely melts through, don't come whining to me."

"Good afternoon." Elizabeth waited for the man in the doorway to acknowledge her presence. He was still apparently distracted by whatever he'd been saying to the guard behind him, and it took him a few seconds to register her words.

Using the time, Elizabeth tried to match everything she'd heard about Doctor Rodney McKay to the man standing in front of her. He wasn't quite the disheveled scientist she'd expected; instead, he was neatly turned out in a patterned shirt and plain khaki trousers. He'd put on a little weight since the photo in his file had been taken, but then, she supposed, he'd been only just back from Siberia at that point. There were lines on his face that could have been laughter lines, although the scowl that he was wearing at that moment suggested that they could equally have been the result of perpetual annoyance. When he finally looked in her general direction, his eyes were challenging and intelligent, and a little surprised.

"It's afternoon?" He put a hand to his wrist. "I took my watch off to work on-" He stopped himself abruptly. "I took it off to work."

"I often do the same." Elizabeth smiled. "I'm Doctor Elizabeth Weir."

Taking a few steps into the room, McKay shook the offered hand. "Doctor Rodney McKay, but I guess you already knew that." He jumped slightly as the door swung closed behind him with a loud bang.

"It's good to meet you at last."

"You'd be surprised how many people don't say that." McKay glanced round the room nervously, registering the furniture arrangement with a slight frown.

"Well, I'm saying it." Gesturing to the chairs, she watched as he sat down, fidgeting a little before settling. When she took the seat opposite, she noticed that he still didn't quite meet her eyes, looking from the floor to her case to the walls and back to his hands, clasped in his lap.

"So, what can I do for you, Doctor Wire?"

"Weir. But please, call me Elizabeth." She paused before going on. On the journey, and even from her first trawl through the files of qualified scientists, she'd known that this was the man she wanted. But sitting here, watching him shift in his chair, his foot tapping and fingers flexing restlessly, she had a moment of doubt. Sam Carter had warned her that he was unbearably egotistical and recklessly confident, but Elizabeth wasn't getting that sense from him. He seemed to be bracing himself, like a man waiting for the other shoe to drop. And he was also waiting for her to speak. That didn't sound right at all.

Clearing her throat, she said, "Doctor McKay, I represent the IOA and the SGC-"

"And no doubt hundreds of other organizations that comprise the alphabet soup of your nation's security." He tutted, shifting on his chair again. "Look, Doctor Wire, you're busy, I'm busy, and while I appreciate your coming all the way out here to give me the bad news in person, I'd also appreciate it if you just cut to the chase. What did I do, who's mad at me, and where are they sending me this time?"

Thrown, Elizabeth tried to replay the statement, which had been delivered with the speed and ferocity of a machine gun. Deciding to tackle one thing at a time, she left her name out of the equation for now, tilting her head and frowning. "I'm sorry?"

"Where are they sending me?" McKay tucked his hands under his arms, hugging himself as he turned in his chair, crossing his legs. "I mean, I've done Berlin, I've done Paris, I've done Vancouver, I've done Siberia and I've been stuck in this miserable excuse for a research base in the middle of nowhere. Just tell me that this time, the people I've ticked off are taking pity and sending me somewhere that doesn't cause frostbite in the winter or heatstroke in the summer."

Elizabeth knew she was doing a lousy job of hiding her smile, but she didn't care. That was more what she'd expected. "Doctor McKay," she said firmly, "I'd like you to come back with me to Antarctica."

There was silence as her words sank in, and she sat back to wait. As with all truly impressive explosions, it started quietly.

McKay nodded, apparently to himself. "That sounds about right. Of course. Antarctica. It wasn't on my list of possibles, but I guess I was just thinking small. Thinking of habitable continents, actual, you know, countries, rather than a frozen death trap." His voice began to rise as he went on. "Does someone at the IOA actually have a sense of humor, because, I really wouldn't have thought it. And, of course, for someone who spent eight months in the freezing, life-threatening, boring cold of Siberia, Antarctica's the only true challenge left." He was gesturing wildly now, face animated and eyes wide. "And the best thing is, I don't even know what I've done! I mean, okay, there was that tiny incident with the staff weapon, but I got it all cleaned up and there was no permanent brain damage – not that you can really tell with Marines anyway – and it was an accident. They happen when you're experimenting with things that no-one else knows how to use. That's why it's called an experiment!"

"It's from the Latin," Elizabeth said, cutting him short. "Meaning 'to try.'"

"Yes! Exactly- er, what?" He turned to her, startled by the interruption and looking at her properly for the first time. As their eyes met, she smiled.

"Doctor McKay," she said evenly, "I am in charge of the Antarctic base."

It took him a second, but then his eyes lit up like an over-excited child.

"The Antarctic base?" he asked, almost vibrating with excitement. "As in the Antarctic base?"

"Yes. And I want you to come and head up the research teams."

"Why?" McKay said abruptly. "I mean, apart from the obvious."

"You are more than qualified for this post, and I need someone who has experience of working with the military. The research is a civilian operation, and I want a civilian scientist in charge. Your name is the only one on my list."

It had been the right tactic. McKay practically preened, then his face clouded over and he frowned. "Where's the catch?"

"I'm sorry?"

"The catch. There's always a catch. I know how good I am, I don't need anyone to tell me that. In fact, most people have no idea how good I am because they can't keep up. So if you're here, telling me how good I am, you're trying to flatter me, which means there's going to be some almighty downside that I don't find out about until after I've signed on the dotted line." He wagged a finger at her. "You, Doctor Wire, are trying to play me, using my ego."

Wryly, Elizabeth decided that the first thing she was going to do after he signed was spell her name for him. Several times. For now, she returned his gaze, raising an eyebrow. "Is it working?"

"Aha! So you admit you're trying to trick me." McKay looked triumphant. "It's no good. I've got a choice about this right? Else you'd just have had me pack up my stuff and ship out. Well, this may be one of the most boring research labs in the world, but it's also one of the safest. I'll just deal with the stuff as you send it to me."

"No."

"Excuse me?"

Mirroring his posture, Elizabeth sat back in her chair and folded her arms. It probably wasn't entirely ethical, but she wasn't above playing dirty. Not when it was for the right cause. "I said no. You either sign on the dotted line and come help me do this, or you don't get your hands on anything we find down there. I mean it."

"That is- That is completely- Do you have any idea-" After a few moments of speechless spluttering, she put him out of his misery.

"I want you to come to Antarctica, because there is every possibility that we can actually mount an expedition to find the lost city of the Ancients. And if we do that, I want you on it." She leaned forwards, putting every ounce of sincerity she could muster into the words. "This is the real thing, Doctor McKay. Come join me."

He looked down for a moment, then up at her again, his expression unguarded at last. He looked hopeful, and just a little lost.

"This is for real," he said softly.

"It's for real."

"And you actually want me?"

For answer, Elizabeth reached into her attaché case and pulled out a sheaf of papers. "These have your name on them."

He took them, running his eyes over the crest at the top and first few lines. "I knew they'd have to have me back eventually," he muttered. "Just a matter of time before they realized their mistake."

And, of course, this was where the hard work began. "Get packed," Elizabeth said, standing and pulling her jacket back on. "You ship out in a week."

"A week?" He looked up at her startled. "That's nowhere near enough time. I've got to shut everything down, finish some experiments, I've got a paper half finished, not to mention-"

"A week, Doctor McKay." She'd scooped up her case and started towards the door when he jumped to his feet and put a hand on her arm, stopping her. When she looked down, he pulled it away quickly, then gave a half-embarrassed laugh.

"Rodney. Please."

Elizabeth nodded. "Rodney." She held out a hand, and he had to juggle the papers a little to shake it. "Good to have you on board."

"Thank you." He let go quickly, glancing at the floor, then back to her face, in a gesture that she realized was embarrassment, rather than disinterest. A half-smile quirked his lips. "And I promise that next time you tell me your name, I'll remember it."

Stamping firmly on the urge to laugh, because he looked so utterly sincere, Elizabeth just nodded. "You make sure you do. Goodbye, Rodney."

Over the thud of the Marine's boots and the click of her own heels, Elizabeth could hear Rodney talking again as he made his way back to his lab. Vaguely, she wondered if he ever stopped, and if he didn't, how she was going to make him. But then there'd be time enough to find out. As they reached the first security door, she allowed herself a small, satisfied smile.

She'd got him.

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Date: 2007-10-24 04:18 pm (UTC)
tarlanx: Wen Kexing holding fan with text FAN (McKay - District SG)
From: [personal profile] tarlanx
Great story! Loved how Elizabeth got through to Rodney :-)

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Date: 2007-10-24 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
Oh Hooray! You posted it!!! *bounces*

but I got it all cleaned up and there was no permanent brain damage – not that you can really tell with Marines anyway –


I absolutely love this line! It's just SO Rodney!!!!

As with all truly impressive explosions, it started quietly.
And this. This is just perfect!

"The catch. There's always a catch. I know how good I am, I don't need anyone to tell me that. In fact, most people have no idea how good I am because they can't keep up. So if you're here, telling me how good I am, you're trying to flatter me, which means there's going to be some almighty downside that I don't find out about until after I've signed on the dotted line."

And this too, perfect Rodney voice!

(Okay, I will stop squeeing now. I loved this, but you probably figured that out by now)

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Date: 2007-10-24 04:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shetiger.livejournal.com
Very nice. :)

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Date: 2007-10-24 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! The dynamic between them really interests me, and I wondered how it all got started.

Glad you liked :)

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Date: 2007-10-24 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*giggle* Thanks! And thanks for the help, with this and the other. Much appreciated :)

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Date: 2007-10-24 05:17 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2007-10-24 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rustydog.livejournal.com
You were right about getting Rodney's voice, from the first half of a sentence to the big complaining speech to his comment about her name. Weir, too. I like that you had her rearrange the furniture out of concern for the tone she was trying to set. I felt like I was watching part of an episode here.

This is the first Atlantis fic I've read and I consider it a great way to start. :)

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Date: 2007-10-24 05:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I'm grinning insanely here *grins insanely* Thank you so much! Rodney's not even a stretch - Shep's hard to write, but Rodney's pretty much me on speed and without the tact-filters ;)

I felt like I was watching part of an episode here.
That's got to be the best compliment, ever. *bounces* Thank you!

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Date: 2007-10-24 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mirabile-dictu.livejournal.com
Oh god, I just love this -- I love Rodney and Elizabeth's friendship so much, and this is a start of a beautiful friendship, right here. Thank you!

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Date: 2007-10-24 05:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
The dynamic between them is so interesting, and I'm chuffed that it worked for you.

Thanks for such a lovely comment! :)

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Date: 2007-10-24 05:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/
Oh, this is just fabulous. I adore them both here, and their interaction is just perfect. ::bounces:: Now I'm really looking forward to the fic that's eating your life.

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Date: 2007-10-24 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neigedens.livejournal.com
Very sweet. Rodney has so many complexes, doesn't he?

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Date: 2007-10-24 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lelianamckay.livejournal.com
I had never really thought about how Rodney might have ended in Antartica. Obviously he had to be appointed by someone and this fic did a great job in that aspect. I like how you caught the suspicious, typical McKay and the wording you did about the job offer from Weir.
*Thumbs up*

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Date: 2007-10-25 06:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! The other fic continues to fight back, so there's probably more where this came from, to keep me sane in the meantime :)

Glad you liked!

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Date: 2007-10-25 06:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
So many! Glad you liked - thanks :)

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Date: 2007-10-25 06:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
These things bug me - I like to know how they happened!

Glad you thought they were in character. Thanks :)

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Date: 2007-10-25 11:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miss-zedem.livejournal.com
*wriggles happily* Yay! You need to cross-post this more, but you posted it, so I'm pleased. Your McKay voice is dead on, the line about the Marine is so perfect I can hear DH saying it, and your Elizabeth is wonderfully IC. Great job!

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Date: 2007-10-25 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*grin* Thanks! All the help is much, much appreciated.

And, comment-addict that I am, I'd happily cross-post if I had the slightest clue where...

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Date: 2007-10-25 12:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miss-zedem.livejournal.com
I can't remember the name of the comm, but it's something along the lines of sga_fic, or atlantis_fic - gimme a few minutes, I'll have a rummage...

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Date: 2007-10-25 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miss-zedem.livejournal.com
OK, I found [livejournal.com profile] atlantisfic, [livejournal.com profile] atlantis_fanfic and [livejournal.com profile] stargatefic. Don't know what they're like, but couldn't hurt to check them out :)

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Date: 2007-10-25 12:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
ooh, thanks! *toddles off*

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Date: 2007-10-25 02:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spike21.livejournal.com
oh! very nice backstory!

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Date: 2007-10-25 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soapbox-solo38.livejournal.com
Oh, lovely. A wonderful explanation, and a great illustration of how they work. Doctor Wire? Promising to get it? Neat little glimpses into their characters. ^^ I'm glad you decided to post this!

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Date: 2007-10-26 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madripoor-rose.livejournal.com
Heh. you really captured Rodney's voice here, and I love the idea of a missing scene to show how McKay was recruited for the Atlantis project. Great story!

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Date: 2007-10-26 08:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! I love filling the in gaps, so I'm glad this worked for you :)

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Date: 2007-10-26 08:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! I was so nervous about it, but am chuffed with the way it's turned out.

Glad you liked! :D

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Date: 2007-10-26 08:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad they sounded in character, and I love missing scenes so much.

thanks for commenting :)

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Date: 2007-10-26 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoife-8.livejournal.com
Yay! Your first SGA fic! *bounces happily*. Loved it. Spot-on voices and excellent backstory. I'm looking forward to the longer piece immensely!

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Date: 2007-10-27 09:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! There'll probably be more shorter pieces first, but I feel like I'm starting to get the hang of it :)

Glad you liked!

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Date: 2007-11-09 02:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rhydwen.livejournal.com
Liked the backstory. Loved how Rodney automatically assumed that he'd pissed someone off (Carter from afar?).

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Date: 2007-11-09 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! I love writing backstory, and I think Rodney can generally assume that he's annoyed someone, somewhere, no matter what :)

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Date: 2008-02-07 05:18 pm (UTC)
leesa_perrie: two cheetahs facing camera and cuddling (Stolen Coffee)
From: [personal profile] leesa_perrie
I LOVE this! Determined Elizabeth and defensive Rodney are just perfect! Oh, poor Rodney, thinking the worst as usual, and getting her name wrong (snort!)... and the bit about the staff weapon, LOL!

Over the thud of the Marine's boots and the click of her own heels, Elizabeth could hear Rodney talking again as he made his way back to his lab. Vaguely, she wondered if he ever stopped, and if he didn't, how she was going to make him.

Hehehe!! She figures it out, though! And that last line - spot on!

Very, very good fic! More please? Maybe when they're at the outpost? Any chance?! Virtual bribes can be offered, if so desired...!!! *grin*

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Date: 2008-02-07 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sg-lab.livejournal.com
I just found this fic and thought it was just lovely. I love pre-series fic that theorizes how Rodney and Elizabeth met and how he got on board with the program.

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Date: 2008-02-07 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! For the comment and the recs :)

This was always intended to be the first of a little series of 'first meetings' - Finding Their Way (http://community.livejournal.com/sga_flashfic/654914.html) is a sort-of sequel, and I have a John and Rodney one in mind. All I need to do is write it... :)

Glad you enjoyed! Thanks!

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Date: 2008-02-07 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Back story fascinates me, because there's just so much potential there.

Glad this worked for you - thanks for commenting :)

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Date: 2008-02-07 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sg-lab.livejournal.com
It fascinates me too. Especially in regards to these two. I've always liked their friendship.

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Date: 2009-07-23 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aqua-eyes.livejournal.com
hee! at least he sort of remembered her name. ^^

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Date: 2009-07-23 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*g* And he gets there eventually!

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