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Date:
2007-11-02 12:52 pm (UTC)
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Oh, this is really nice. The sense of dissociation is perfect for Buffy and perfect for the situation.
watching her hands and the water that's running down the sidewalk and the smudges of ash and mud on her pants
I like those details a lot.
Just a teeny thing, I think you've got an extra 'o' -
terribly important things that she should be listening too
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Date: 2007-11-02 12:52 pm (UTC)watching her hands and the water that's running down the sidewalk and the smudges of ash and mud on her pants
I like those details a lot.
Just a teeny thing, I think you've got an extra 'o' - terribly important things that she should be listening too