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Dec. 16th, 2009 03:31 pmDear Successful Historical Novelist,
Please, please, please stop with the epithets. Seriously, if this was a fanfiction rather than a library book, I'd be taking a red pen to it. You gave your characters perfectly good names, and the story flows a whole lot better when you use them.
I'm sick here. Please to not be upsetting my stomach more than it already is.
No love
Me
Please, please, please stop with the epithets. Seriously, if this was a fanfiction rather than a library book, I'd be taking a red pen to it. You gave your characters perfectly good names, and the story flows a whole lot better when you use them.
I'm sick here. Please to not be upsetting my stomach more than it already is.
No love
Me