This is really awesome. Teyla is fantastic in this. I love the way you build the connection between Teyla and Ester. It makes her betrayal so much worse. You have a great idea of what makes the Ancients so much of a pain in the ass. What really makes me happy is that it's not Rodney or Ronon or John who saves her in the end; it's Teyla kicking ass and doing what needs to be done to save herself, and her unborn child. I really, really enjoyed that.