Although this is definitely way-out-there AU, I love how you've kept a light hand on the tiller of canon -- okay, I could not resist the sailing metaphor -- in that John's enraged the Wraith crew by destroying their Queen. Hehee!
And there's something about "acres of shirt" that makes me giggle. That's an excellent description for poufy shirts. :)
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Date: 2008-10-31 09:15 pm (UTC)And there's something about "acres of shirt" that makes me giggle. That's an excellent description for poufy shirts. :)