"Acres of shirt" - bwah! And he broke their Queen!
A lot of times it's hard for me to imagine things differently, but you've described this so well, I could see it all. It makes perfect sense inside itself and the characters are still *them*. So much fun! And in my mind, inventor/gunsmith Rodney is actually kind of hot, which... surprised me. *g*
Nice touch with the skull and crossbones grapic, too, and the summary. :) It sounds like this was fun for you to write - I hope so, because it was enjoyable to read!
Teeny little missing letter - There were two things Rodney hadn't though(t) of when choosing their hiding place
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Date: 2008-11-01 04:05 pm (UTC)A lot of times it's hard for me to imagine things differently, but you've described this so well, I could see it all. It makes perfect sense inside itself and the characters are still *them*. So much fun! And in my mind, inventor/gunsmith Rodney is actually kind of hot, which... surprised me. *g*
Nice touch with the skull and crossbones grapic, too, and the summary. :) It sounds like this was fun for you to write - I hope so, because it was enjoyable to read!
Teeny little missing letter -
There were two things Rodney hadn't though(t) of when choosing their hiding place