ext_24173 ([identity profile] miss-zedem.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jadesfire 2007-05-03 08:48 am (UTC)

Oh I love this chapter!!! The tension between Hywel and Jack is perfect, and it's such an interesting story. Love it! *happy sigh*

(Noticed a tiny error - Then walked silently to the nearest junction - needs a 'he' after 'then'. Can't believe I missed that on the twenty-seven read-throughs *headdesk* :D)

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