That was most awesome. I love telepathy related storylines, and you've done an excellent job with this one thus far; I can't wait to read the rest. I also really like the fact that Jack doesn't end up getting it on with Hywel. That would have been the obvious way to go, but your decision to have him refuse tells us a lot more about the character. Jack's an honorable guy, after all; a lot of writers, alas, forget this in their quest to have him hook up with as many people as possible (a laudable goal to be sure, but not one that should be accomplished by turning Jack into a real creep!).
Incidentally, I got your e-mail! Thanks for the excellent edits and comments. I shall probably send you the next part once I finish it (I added a bit more yesterday), and then, once I incorporate your comments, send you a complete version.
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Date: 2007-05-03 01:18 pm (UTC)Incidentally, I got your e-mail! Thanks for the excellent edits and comments. I shall probably send you the next part once I finish it (I added a bit more yesterday), and then, once I incorporate your comments, send you a complete version.