I'm glad you posted on whitecollarfic - otherwise, I would have missed this!!! I think this is one of the best and most subtle characterizations of Neal that I've ever read. You say so much with just how you describe his *posture* - really, really well done. The dynamics between he and Peter (and all the complicated thought processes running through Peter's head) were EXCELLENTLY done!
I hope you write more in this fandom - I'd LOVE to read it!
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Date: 2010-03-25 07:44 pm (UTC)I hope you write more in this fandom - I'd LOVE to read it!