ext_14679 ([identity profile] trystings.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jadesfire 2010-03-25 09:08 pm (UTC)

"Did you dent the censer?" Peter asked, figuring it was worth a shot. Not that it had ever worked in the past, but if the near-death experience had rattled Neal enough to make him talkative, Peter was only going to feel a little ashamed of himself for taking advantage of it.

Peter would so do that!

You really nailed their complicated relationship, the banter, the awkwardness about Neal's tracker, their voices; it's all spot on.

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