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Huge thanks to [livejournal.com profile] highonstargate for my pretty, pretty banner:

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(clicking will take you to the story :))

Also, I watched "The Prodigal" at the weekend, then was doing some research for a story and noticed something. I'm writing something that references "The Game" so I looked up the transcript. When John and Rodney are telling Elizabeth about the game room, Rodney says:

"We were exploring the city, checking out some labs on the east pier when we discovered a room."

You see that? At this point, I'm definitely taking the East Pier as John and Rodney's super sekkrit clubhouse, and as the location for beer in "The Shrine". This probably doesn't matter to anyone except me, but it's a nice backdrop for my fic.

In other news, writing about knitting has broken my writer's block. Go figure.

How's everyone else at the moment? Doing okay? The sun is shining here for the second day in a row, so I feel like some of the fog in my head is starting to burn off. This is A Good Thing. Definitely.

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Date: 2008-11-12 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] in-the-bottle.livejournal.com
Hate the sun. Wish it'll GO AWAY!

So HOT.

Its almost midnight and it's still 26C!

*melts*

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Date: 2008-11-12 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I hate heat, but the sunlight is saving my sanity right now, so I'll hang onto it, thank you very much.

Yeouch. *sends fan*

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Date: 2008-11-12 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] in-the-bottle.livejournal.com
Even the fan isn't helping much. If you have hot air, all it can blow around is still hot air...

Your sun is good. I like your sun. You don't get sun burn from your sun after walking in it for 3 minutes to get some lunch. I like your sun.

*is hating Australian summer so much right now*

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Date: 2008-11-12 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greyias.livejournal.com
This probably doesn't matter to anyone except me, but it's a nice backdrop for my fic.

Are you crazy? It matters to me too! Secret clubhouse ftw!

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Date: 2008-11-12 01:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*giggle* So where's my AU where Rodney and John are 9 and have an *actual* clubhouse, huh? Maybe a treehouse with a rope ladder and no girls allowed (except Teyla, of course, cos she can beat them all up and they're too scared to kick her out).

Where is it, hmmm? ;)

I love the idea that the writers seem to have this hidden continuity, where the East Pier is where John and Rodney hang out, in the same way that John and Elizabeth talk on the balcony. It just works somehow, in my head.

Treehouse Comment!Fic (part one)

Date: 2008-11-12 05:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greyias.livejournal.com
Where is it, hmmm? ;)

Somewhere, high above the vacant lot on East Pier Street...

Rodney looked up from tweaking the output on the motor of the the bright, yellow RC car in his lap as John clambered up the last knots of the old rope that served as their ladder. The other boy landed on the floor of their secret lair with a loud thump, shaking the entire structure and rustling the branches and leaves outside.

"What's the password?" Rodney asked sourly.

"I brought a friend!" John beamed.

"That's not it," Rodney muttered, and resumed his tinkering for a few seconds before looking up sharply. "You can't bring a friend! Remember what happened last time?"

The 'last time' cleared her throat loudly and arched a brow under a messy ponytail, but never once looked up from the Hardy Boys novel she was reading. Rodney coughed into his hand and looked back at John. "What I mean is the last friend you brought was so cool, the Batcave can't take anymore."

"For the last time, it's not the Batcave," John corrected. "It's the top floor of the Baxter Building!"

"Do we really need to relive the DC versus Marvel debate? About how Batman could single-handedly take out the Fantastic Four while saving the planet from Dr. Doom, the Joker, and the Legion of Doom?"

"You're just jealous because you never get to be Mr. Fantastic."

"Well, it makes no sense for me to be the Human Torch! I don't want to fly, mock bullies, or set myself on fire with a stupid catch-phrase unlike some people I know!"

"That would be so cool."

"No, I think you mean it would be blazing hot."

"No, I think I meant it would be cool--"

"Maybe that's what you meant, but what you said--"

"Is that your friend, John?" Teyla interrupted, voice strained.

"Oh, right." John sent Rodney a dirty glare at motioned at the giant hairy mass that could be hiding a human child underneath to come from where he was leisurely hanging on the rope outside. "Guys, this is Ronon."

"Hi," the hairy thing said.

"Pleased to meet you, Ronon," Teyla said, lowering the paperback long enough to send a welcoming smile.

"No girls allowed!" Rodney pointed to the sign clearly stating the Batcave's sacred rule. "Sorry, Rhoda!"

The hair-ball actually snarled, and climbed into the tree house despite Rodney's very explicit warning that the action was not permitted.

"His name is Ronon," John corrected with a roll of his eyes. "He's new in town."

"And?" Rodney prompted. "You decided to bring him here? It's not a secret lair if you keep showing it to everyone!"

"You can see it from the street," Ronon pointed out, very unnecessarily.

"I... that is... I'm working on that!"

"Well, Ronon, you've met Rodney. And that over there is Teyla."

Ronon might have raised a bushy brow, but under all of that hair, who could really tell? "I thought you said there were 'no girls allowed'."

"Teyla's not a girl!" Rodney huffed. "She's... Teyla."

"She hits us really hard," John whispered to Ronon. "With sticks."

All this did was produce a grin from the newest addition to the clubhouse. "Cool."

"Oh, great, another one," Rodney grumbled.

"That's Rodney's way of saying, 'welcome to the club'."

"It is not."

"Huh," Ronon grunted noncommittally as he ambled around the tree house. Rodney just gave him a dirty look and huddled his race car and tools closer as he pretended to ignore that anything untoward was going on in the Batcave. "So, what do you guys do for fun?"

Treehouse Comment!Fic (part two)

Date: 2008-11-12 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greyias.livejournal.com
"This is fun," Rodney said sourly. "If you don't like that--"

"We could play a game," John suggested. "Oh, I know! Now that we have four people, we totally can play--"

"All who oppose Fantastic Four and being lumped into roles at our 'leader's' arbitrary reasoning--" Rodney announced loudly, raising his free hand in the air. "--say 'aye'!"

"Aye." Without breaking her reading stride, Teyla raised her hand. "I am not invisible," she stated archly.

With a shrug, Ronon raised his hand, earning a betrayed look. "What?"

"This isn't fair," John whined.

"Majority rules is one of the tenets of democracy--"

"Does your mom read you a dictionary as your bedtime story?"

"Just because some of us want to expand our bright, young minds--"

Teyla managed to make a loud production of putting down her paperback novel. "We will play Lost City of Atlantis."

"But we played that last week," Rodney whined, earning himself a narrow-eyed look. "And I had such a great time!"

"But Teyla," John joined in on the whining, managing to drag her name out to five syllables, "underwater cities are no fun."

"Then it will rise to the surface."

"Oh, come on," Rodney scoffed, "when does that ever happen?"

"But I want to fly," John continued to whine. "Mr. Fantastic has the Fantasticar, and it flys!"

"Then you can have the Fantasticar."

"No, no, no, that's all wrong," Rodney interrupted. "Only the Fantastic Four can use the Fantasticar. It only works for them."

"Then he can have a spaceship," she explained patiently.

"Wait, wait, in Atlantis?" Rodney interrupted. "That's crazy, Atlantis is a city on a lost continent here on Earth. You can't have spaceships on Earth--"

"Then Atlantis will be set in space."

"But humans can't breathe in space!"

"Then it will be set on another planet, and John will fly us there in his spaceship," Teyla ground out.

"But I don't like flying, especially John's. He goes too fast, cuts off all of the other soap-box-turned-spaceships, and tries to make me throw up by taking really, really sharp turns--"

"C'mon, Rodney," John interrupted, "it'll be fun. We can be space explorers!"

"Like Star Trek?" Rodney asked hopefully.

"But better!"

"There's nothing better than Star Trek!"

"Can I have a sword?" Ronon asked.

"Yes, Ronon, you can," Teyla said patiently as she herded the two bickering boys toward the rope.

"And a gun that can shoot lasers?"

"Like phasers?" Rodney brightened up. "It could have a stun setting and--oh, I might have something that could work in my garage--"

"This is going to be so cool!" John crowed as he bounced on one of the lower knots.

"Stop shaking the rope!" Rodney cried, clinging tighter. "Oh, no, I'm getting vertigo!"

"So," Ronon said, "you beat them with sticks?"

"It's very effective at keeping them focused."

"Cool." Ronon grinned, before they both climbed down the rope to join the bickering duo in front of the soapbox Fantasticar/Batmobile/spaceship.

"We're not calling it that," John stated firmly.

"Well, why not?"

"Because it's stupid."

"Oh, and like Puddlejumper is a good name for a spaceship? Exactly what are you trying to imply with that name? We're going to break down at the first galactic turn-off on Athos Lane!"

"We only will if you forgot to oil the hinges that you promised to do last week--"

"I'll go get a stick," Ronon rumbled.

"Well, I wouldn't need to perform repairs on the thing if you didn't drive like one of the Duke Boys!" Rodney waved his arms frantically

"Ooh, that gives me an idea, we should totally jump the creek at Genii Drive." John grinned. "You know, let it earn its name."

"Oh, god, we're going to die--"

~Fin~

Re: Treehouse Comment!Fic (part two)

Date: 2008-11-12 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I...I think I love you.

I've reached pitches of squee that only dogs can hear, and the readers are all wondering why I'm making small choking noises as I try not to die of giggles.

This is just so wonderful, so far beyond wonderful. Please, please would you post it up so that I can link to it, because genius like this should be shared.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

*goes to copy, paste and print for future giggling*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dune-drd.livejournal.com
Can't eat. Can't walk. Meh.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dune-drd.livejournal.com
Need sun. And a new stomach. Will trade for freezing rain

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pwcorgigirl.livejournal.com
That banner -- oh, mercy. I just drooled all over myself.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*proffers tissue* It is gorgeous, isn't it? Just perfect :D

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
can I borrow your sun? it's snowing here

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Oh noes! *sends sunshine*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
luckily it's not that cold, but the grey is blechy.

Have you seen the puppycam (http://cdn1.ustream.tv/swf/4/viewer.45.swf?cid=317016)yet? I keep forgetting to post it for you. Shibu inu puppies!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Puppies! Rusty linked me too it the other day, and half my flist seems to be addicted. They must be the most-watched puppies in the history of ever :)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
they are just so dang cute. I can watch them and not freak out over the newest lfws challenge (OMG HARD!!!)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*grin* Yeah. So VERY strict, but a very cool challenge nonetheless. The hard bit is going to be the characters, not the wordlessness, I think. No other interaction when you've got people whose paths wouldn't necessarily cross in an H/C manner is *tough*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
yeah- minor characters who normally don't interact much (Chuck- come on CHUCK?!?) and add in the h/c AND no dialogue but that there needs to be interaction? *chews fingernails* very very hard

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I'd missed the interaction bit. *sigh* But then, if it wasn't hard, then no one would get voted off and that would kind of defeat the point. I signed up to write outside my comfort zone. It's just...*shivers*...it's scary out here...

*goes back to drawing board*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
yeah- exactly- there's out of the comfort zone and in way over your head with sharks circling. I'm going to *try* to come up with something though

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:19 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (Default)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
The East Pier is their clubhouse!!! That is awesomeness! ^__^ no wonder it's *the* pier in "The Shrine"; it's their special place!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*nodnodnod* So very much. It's one of those lovely 'huh' things that make writing fic for this show so much fun!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] in-the-bottle.livejournal.com
Hate the sun. Wish it'll GO AWAY!

So HOT.

Its almost midnight and it's still 26C!

*melts*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I hate heat, but the sunlight is saving my sanity right now, so I'll hang onto it, thank you very much.

Yeouch. *sends fan*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] in-the-bottle.livejournal.com
Even the fan isn't helping much. If you have hot air, all it can blow around is still hot air...

Your sun is good. I like your sun. You don't get sun burn from your sun after walking in it for 3 minutes to get some lunch. I like your sun.

*is hating Australian summer so much right now*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greyias.livejournal.com
This probably doesn't matter to anyone except me, but it's a nice backdrop for my fic.

Are you crazy? It matters to me too! Secret clubhouse ftw!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 01:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*giggle* So where's my AU where Rodney and John are 9 and have an *actual* clubhouse, huh? Maybe a treehouse with a rope ladder and no girls allowed (except Teyla, of course, cos she can beat them all up and they're too scared to kick her out).

Where is it, hmmm? ;)

I love the idea that the writers seem to have this hidden continuity, where the East Pier is where John and Rodney hang out, in the same way that John and Elizabeth talk on the balcony. It just works somehow, in my head.

Treehouse Comment!Fic (part one)

Date: 2008-11-12 05:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greyias.livejournal.com
Where is it, hmmm? ;)

Somewhere, high above the vacant lot on East Pier Street...

Rodney looked up from tweaking the output on the motor of the the bright, yellow RC car in his lap as John clambered up the last knots of the old rope that served as their ladder. The other boy landed on the floor of their secret lair with a loud thump, shaking the entire structure and rustling the branches and leaves outside.

"What's the password?" Rodney asked sourly.

"I brought a friend!" John beamed.

"That's not it," Rodney muttered, and resumed his tinkering for a few seconds before looking up sharply. "You can't bring a friend! Remember what happened last time?"

The 'last time' cleared her throat loudly and arched a brow under a messy ponytail, but never once looked up from the Hardy Boys novel she was reading. Rodney coughed into his hand and looked back at John. "What I mean is the last friend you brought was so cool, the Batcave can't take anymore."

"For the last time, it's not the Batcave," John corrected. "It's the top floor of the Baxter Building!"

"Do we really need to relive the DC versus Marvel debate? About how Batman could single-handedly take out the Fantastic Four while saving the planet from Dr. Doom, the Joker, and the Legion of Doom?"

"You're just jealous because you never get to be Mr. Fantastic."

"Well, it makes no sense for me to be the Human Torch! I don't want to fly, mock bullies, or set myself on fire with a stupid catch-phrase unlike some people I know!"

"That would be so cool."

"No, I think you mean it would be blazing hot."

"No, I think I meant it would be cool--"

"Maybe that's what you meant, but what you said--"

"Is that your friend, John?" Teyla interrupted, voice strained.

"Oh, right." John sent Rodney a dirty glare at motioned at the giant hairy mass that could be hiding a human child underneath to come from where he was leisurely hanging on the rope outside. "Guys, this is Ronon."

"Hi," the hairy thing said.

"Pleased to meet you, Ronon," Teyla said, lowering the paperback long enough to send a welcoming smile.

"No girls allowed!" Rodney pointed to the sign clearly stating the Batcave's sacred rule. "Sorry, Rhoda!"

The hair-ball actually snarled, and climbed into the tree house despite Rodney's very explicit warning that the action was not permitted.

"His name is Ronon," John corrected with a roll of his eyes. "He's new in town."

"And?" Rodney prompted. "You decided to bring him here? It's not a secret lair if you keep showing it to everyone!"

"You can see it from the street," Ronon pointed out, very unnecessarily.

"I... that is... I'm working on that!"

"Well, Ronon, you've met Rodney. And that over there is Teyla."

Ronon might have raised a bushy brow, but under all of that hair, who could really tell? "I thought you said there were 'no girls allowed'."

"Teyla's not a girl!" Rodney huffed. "She's... Teyla."

"She hits us really hard," John whispered to Ronon. "With sticks."

All this did was produce a grin from the newest addition to the clubhouse. "Cool."

"Oh, great, another one," Rodney grumbled.

"That's Rodney's way of saying, 'welcome to the club'."

"It is not."

"Huh," Ronon grunted noncommittally as he ambled around the tree house. Rodney just gave him a dirty look and huddled his race car and tools closer as he pretended to ignore that anything untoward was going on in the Batcave. "So, what do you guys do for fun?"

Treehouse Comment!Fic (part two)

Date: 2008-11-12 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greyias.livejournal.com
"This is fun," Rodney said sourly. "If you don't like that--"

"We could play a game," John suggested. "Oh, I know! Now that we have four people, we totally can play--"

"All who oppose Fantastic Four and being lumped into roles at our 'leader's' arbitrary reasoning--" Rodney announced loudly, raising his free hand in the air. "--say 'aye'!"

"Aye." Without breaking her reading stride, Teyla raised her hand. "I am not invisible," she stated archly.

With a shrug, Ronon raised his hand, earning a betrayed look. "What?"

"This isn't fair," John whined.

"Majority rules is one of the tenets of democracy--"

"Does your mom read you a dictionary as your bedtime story?"

"Just because some of us want to expand our bright, young minds--"

Teyla managed to make a loud production of putting down her paperback novel. "We will play Lost City of Atlantis."

"But we played that last week," Rodney whined, earning himself a narrow-eyed look. "And I had such a great time!"

"But Teyla," John joined in on the whining, managing to drag her name out to five syllables, "underwater cities are no fun."

"Then it will rise to the surface."

"Oh, come on," Rodney scoffed, "when does that ever happen?"

"But I want to fly," John continued to whine. "Mr. Fantastic has the Fantasticar, and it flys!"

"Then you can have the Fantasticar."

"No, no, no, that's all wrong," Rodney interrupted. "Only the Fantastic Four can use the Fantasticar. It only works for them."

"Then he can have a spaceship," she explained patiently.

"Wait, wait, in Atlantis?" Rodney interrupted. "That's crazy, Atlantis is a city on a lost continent here on Earth. You can't have spaceships on Earth--"

"Then Atlantis will be set in space."

"But humans can't breathe in space!"

"Then it will be set on another planet, and John will fly us there in his spaceship," Teyla ground out.

"But I don't like flying, especially John's. He goes too fast, cuts off all of the other soap-box-turned-spaceships, and tries to make me throw up by taking really, really sharp turns--"

"C'mon, Rodney," John interrupted, "it'll be fun. We can be space explorers!"

"Like Star Trek?" Rodney asked hopefully.

"But better!"

"There's nothing better than Star Trek!"

"Can I have a sword?" Ronon asked.

"Yes, Ronon, you can," Teyla said patiently as she herded the two bickering boys toward the rope.

"And a gun that can shoot lasers?"

"Like phasers?" Rodney brightened up. "It could have a stun setting and--oh, I might have something that could work in my garage--"

"This is going to be so cool!" John crowed as he bounced on one of the lower knots.

"Stop shaking the rope!" Rodney cried, clinging tighter. "Oh, no, I'm getting vertigo!"

"So," Ronon said, "you beat them with sticks?"

"It's very effective at keeping them focused."

"Cool." Ronon grinned, before they both climbed down the rope to join the bickering duo in front of the soapbox Fantasticar/Batmobile/spaceship.

"We're not calling it that," John stated firmly.

"Well, why not?"

"Because it's stupid."

"Oh, and like Puddlejumper is a good name for a spaceship? Exactly what are you trying to imply with that name? We're going to break down at the first galactic turn-off on Athos Lane!"

"We only will if you forgot to oil the hinges that you promised to do last week--"

"I'll go get a stick," Ronon rumbled.

"Well, I wouldn't need to perform repairs on the thing if you didn't drive like one of the Duke Boys!" Rodney waved his arms frantically

"Ooh, that gives me an idea, we should totally jump the creek at Genii Drive." John grinned. "You know, let it earn its name."

"Oh, god, we're going to die--"

~Fin~

Re: Treehouse Comment!Fic (part two)

Date: 2008-11-12 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I...I think I love you.

I've reached pitches of squee that only dogs can hear, and the readers are all wondering why I'm making small choking noises as I try not to die of giggles.

This is just so wonderful, so far beyond wonderful. Please, please would you post it up so that I can link to it, because genius like this should be shared.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

*goes to copy, paste and print for future giggling*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dune-drd.livejournal.com
Can't eat. Can't walk. Meh.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dune-drd.livejournal.com
Need sun. And a new stomach. Will trade for freezing rain

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pwcorgigirl.livejournal.com
That banner -- oh, mercy. I just drooled all over myself.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*proffers tissue* It is gorgeous, isn't it? Just perfect :D

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
can I borrow your sun? it's snowing here

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Oh noes! *sends sunshine*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
luckily it's not that cold, but the grey is blechy.

Have you seen the puppycam (http://cdn1.ustream.tv/swf/4/viewer.45.swf?cid=317016)yet? I keep forgetting to post it for you. Shibu inu puppies!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Puppies! Rusty linked me too it the other day, and half my flist seems to be addicted. They must be the most-watched puppies in the history of ever :)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
they are just so dang cute. I can watch them and not freak out over the newest lfws challenge (OMG HARD!!!)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*grin* Yeah. So VERY strict, but a very cool challenge nonetheless. The hard bit is going to be the characters, not the wordlessness, I think. No other interaction when you've got people whose paths wouldn't necessarily cross in an H/C manner is *tough*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
yeah- minor characters who normally don't interact much (Chuck- come on CHUCK?!?) and add in the h/c AND no dialogue but that there needs to be interaction? *chews fingernails* very very hard

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I'd missed the interaction bit. *sigh* But then, if it wasn't hard, then no one would get voted off and that would kind of defeat the point. I signed up to write outside my comfort zone. It's just...*shivers*...it's scary out here...

*goes back to drawing board*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
yeah- exactly- there's out of the comfort zone and in way over your head with sharks circling. I'm going to *try* to come up with something though

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:19 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (sga mcshep pier 2)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
The East Pier is their clubhouse!!! That is awesomeness! ^__^ no wonder it's *the* pier in "The Shrine"; it's their special place!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-11-12 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*nodnodnod* So very much. It's one of those lovely 'huh' things that make writing fic for this show so much fun!