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Prompt #153 from [livejournal.com profile] cyber_istari: Someone (or thing) at Torchwood 3 is chronologically out of place, jeopardizing the fabric of space and time, yadda. Sapphire and Steel have been assigned. No Owen, I'm afraid, so I miss out on the bonus points. He didn't want to play…


Title: Prices

Words: ~2330
Warning/Rating: None/Gen
Spoilers: Yes, for "Out of Time"

With thanks to [livejournal.com profile] crystalshard for helping prod this into shape.

Summary: There's always a price, even for doing the right thing.



Prices

"Excuse me?"

Debbie turned, smiling at the tall, well-spoken customer who'd attracted her attention.

"Can I help you?"

"I hope so," the lady said, smiling warmly back. "Do you do this in blue?" She held up a dappled brown scarf which looked drab against her light blue top and navy skirt.

Frowning, Debbie shook her head. "I'm sorry. It only comes in red and brown. But blue's the main colour in the Austen collection this year. It's just round the next corner."

"Thank you very much." The woman smiled, walking off in the direction indicated, leaving Debbie to go back to her stocktaking.

The scarf was discarded, hung on the end of a lingerie rack, and the woman took the escalator up to the next floor. As she stepped off, a hand grasped her elbow, guiding her away from the flow of people and a low voice in her ear said,

"Where is he?"

Sapphire turned, still aware of the firm grip on her elbow, and looked into Jack Harkness' grim face.

"Hello to you too," she said, raising an eyebrow at him.

"Where is he?" Jack asked again, drawing her further from the main traffic route through the shop. "If you're here, then he's here too. Where?"

"In the cafe upstairs," she told him, her voice light and easy. "I was just on my way there. Care to join me?"

"Lead on."

He didn't let her go as they stepped onto the escalator again, standing close to her as though they were just out for a shopping trip together. Reaching out, she felt his mind pressing against hers as his fingers dug into her elbow hard enough to bruise.

"Jack," she said, and he shook himself, loosening his grip.

"Sorry." He let go, transferring his arm to her waist and holding her close.

"I'm not sure where you think I'm going to go," she said, amused, as they made their way towards the café.

Jack's eyes were scanning the seated customers. "I just don't want you warning him that I'm here," he replied. "Not until- ah."

Steel was sitting in the far corner, his back to the wall and his arm resting on the windowsill beside him. Sensing Sapphire's arrival, he turned and his eyes widened for a moment when he saw Jack. Even from this far away, his expression radiated annoyance.

"Now see what you did," Sapphire murmured, seeing Jack's lips twitch.

"You go calm him down," he said, releasing her at last. "I'll get us some drinks."

Approaching the table, Sapphire saw the hard line of Steel's mouth and the clenched fist that rested lightly on the windowsill. She took the chair next to his, dropping her eyes to the table and his untouched cup of coffee before meeting his accusing stare.

"What was I supposed to do?" she said reasonably. "He knew you had to be here somewhere."

"So you decided we should all go for coffee?" Steel shook his head, his mouth twisting in a humourless smile that reminded her of Jack's. "How friendly."

"Steel," she began, only to be interrupted by Jack's return, bringing a glass of water for himself and a camomile tea for her.

"It's not her fault," he said, passing her cup across. "I knew you were around the moment you crossed my timeline."

"This is none of your business, Jack." Steel's voice was as grim as his expression. "Stay out of it."

"The girl is my business. Leave her alone."

Sapphire took a sip of her tea, watching the two men glower at each other.

"She's an anomaly," Steel said at last. "Anomalies are our business, you know that."

"And I'm telling you that she's under my protection."

"Is that supposed to impress me?"

"It's supposed to warn you."

Steel leaned forwards, dropping his voice. "Do not threaten me, Jack. Remember who you're talking to."

"Is that supposed to impress me?" Jack echoed, also leaning forwards. "She's doing no harm to anyone. She deserves a chance to make a life for herself."

Rolling his eyes, Steel sat back in his chair, looking to Sapphire for help.

"She's a gap in time," she said to Jack. "All three of them were."

"Two of them have been resolved," Steel put in, "but she-"

"Resolved?" Jack's angry movement knocked his glass, spilling water across the table. Ignoring it, he shook his head. "You're talking about human beings."

"No," Steel said firmly, "we're talking about anomalies in time. Fractures in the chronology. We have to put them right."

Something in his tone must have given him away, and Sapphire shot him an exasperated look as Jack frowned.

"Put them right?" he repeated, the frown clearing as his mouth fell open. "She was going to fly back into the rift, Owen said. She flew into the rift and you were there waiting for her, weren't you."

Unable to meet his accusing stare, Sapphire looked at Steel, who shrugged.

"I don't have to justify myself to you. Holes in time must be patched."

For a moment, Sapphire thought she was going to have to intervene. Jack's face was flushed and the muscles in his jaw clenched as he struggled to get a grip on himself. She reached out to lay a hand on his arm, but he pulled it away, spreading more water across the table.

"Don't," he said in a strangled voice, then took a deep breath, his fingers trailing through the spilt water. "Do you know how the other anomaly resolved itself? Do you?" Before she could answer, his hand snaked out and grabbed her wrist. She heard Steel's cup rattling in its saucer, felt the cold wetness of Jack's fingers, caught a glimpse of Steel's surprise as Jack caught his wrist too, all of which was overwhelmed by the sensations coming from the simple skin-to-skin contact.

She was sitting in a car, contemporary to this time period by the feel of the soft seat beneath her. The air was stifling, clinging to the inside of her mouth and throat and layering grime across her face. Someone was holding her hand, and she turned her head, gasping from suffocation and surprise. The man in the driver's seat had his eyes closed and was taking deep gulps of the choking air. As she watched, his head began to fall forwards and she felt the hand in hers stiffen, then grow limp. She closed her eyes, trying to focus beyond this moment, to bring herself out of the waking nightmare. When she opened them again to look at the slumped figure in the other seat, she felt the panic rise in her again. Steel's head was on his chest, and the pale hand in hers was cold and lifeless.

There wasn't enough air in her lungs for her to scream, but she pulled away reflexively, breaking the contact and bringing her back to the here and now. Panting hard, she reached out to Steel, hand and mind, trying to ground herself again. Steel was leaning over the table, his head down and his hair falling into his face. She could see his shoulders rising and falling as he rode out the end of the emotional surge, and he returned her brief contact with a squeeze of her hand. After another moment, he looked up at Jack, normally calm eyes blazing with anger.

"How dare you-" he began, then stopped short. Looking across, Sapphire saw the trail of wetness running down Jack's face and the paleness of his cheeks and forehead.

"I was there," Jack whispered hoarsely. "I sat in that car, and held his hand as he died. I was there."

"We've been there, now," Sapphire said, rubbing her hand across the base of her throat. "You're getting stronger."

"I learn fast." Jack's eyes were still on Steel. "Find another way."

"What makes you think there is one?"

"There always is. Find it."

Steel looked away, staring out of the window, lost in thought or frustration, she couldn't tell. Sapphire was acutely aware of the conversations carrying around them and the steady drip-drip as the puddle of water ran over the edge of the table. She noticed that Jack's sleeve was soaking, and her wrist was still blanched white where he had gripped it. Eventually, Steel stirred himself, glancing at Jack, then meeting Sapphire's curious gaze.

"Can it be done?" he asked, and she caught the shape of what he was thinking. Very slowly, she took the idea and moulded it, giving it structure and order, pushing at it until it was complete and whole in her mind. Then she nodded.

"I think so."

That was enough for Steel. It always was.

"It can be done," he told Jack. "We can patch the damage, anchor her in this time and place. But it takes a lot of power to do something like that."

"You can do it though?" Jack asked, looking from one of them to the other.

Steel shook his head. "Not us. You." At his glance, Sapphire reached out and took Jack's hand, showing him what they could do. His eyes widened for a moment, then he nodded.

"I agree."

"You understand the risk?" Steel asked. "It will loosen your own grip on this time, if not break it entirely. Even if we do manage to keep you here and now, you live on top of a dimensional rift. You could end up pulled through it at any moment and you'd have no way of stopping it."

"I've got a good team," Jack said, standing up. "They wouldn't let me go that easily. I agree. Let's go."


It had been a long day. What with stocktaking and the new lines coming out and some particularly obnoxious customers, Debbie was exhausted by the time she got off the shop floor. She was almost too tired to notice the man standing outside the staff locker rooms.

"Hi, Emma," he said, and Debbie jumped. Lounging against the wall with that so-familiar smile in place, was Jack Harkness. She gaped, then closed her mouth quickly.

"No-one calls me that now," she reminded him, looking up and down the corridor. "What are you doing here?"

"I've just come to see you." Jack pushed off the wall, coming over and taking her hands in his, lifting them as if to get a better look at her. "Don't you look great? How's the job?"

"Fantastic." Smiling despite herself, Debbie let him look her up and down. "I love London."

"Good. Because you're going to be here for a very long time."

Before she could ask him what he meant, Debbie felt hands pressing onto her shoulders and the world spun and faded to black.

She woke up feeling as though someone had taken a sledgehammer to her head. Groaning a little, she opened her eyes a fraction, squinting in the light of the corridor.

"Easy does it," someone said, helping her to sit up. When she managed to get her eyes all the way open, she was looking into Jack's smiling face. He seemed paler than when he'd met her and there were deep shadows under his eyes that she was sure she would have noticed. But then, she'd been fairly tired herself. Strangely, apart from the pounding headache, she actually felt quite a lot better.

"What happened?"

"You skipped lunch today," he said, wagging a finger at her. "Never a good idea when you're on your feet all the time." He stood up, holding out his hand. "I'll buy you a really good dinner to make up for it."

She hesitated. "Is everything alright, Jack? I mean, you're not here to take me back to Torchwood or-"

"Nothing like that," he said quickly. "I just wanted to see how you were doing. Catch up. That kind of thing. Come on." He waggled his fingers. "I've got an expense account warmed up and ready to go."

Laughing, she took his hand and let him pull her to her feet. "I'll just get my coat."

Coming back with her bag over one arm and coat over the other, she heard Jack's voice up ahead, low and gentle, then a woman's, warm and honeyed. It reminded her of one of her customers from earlier in the day. Turning the corner, she was surprised to see Jack standing there alone, still leaning against the wall and still smiling his ever-charming smile.

"I thought I heard voices," she said, feeling a little silly.

Jack raised his eyebrows. "Anyone specific?"

"Not exactly, I just..." she trailed off, shaking her head. "Must have been coming from the other direction."

"That's probably it," Jack said, taking her coat and helping her into it. "Now, let's get some dinner. What about Italian?" He offered her his arm and they set off towards the exit.

"Actually, my housemates took me to a wonderful Thai restaurant the other night. We could try there."

"Thai?" Jack laughed. "You are settled in, aren't you? Thai it is."

********************

Their laughter echoed down the corridor for rather longer that it should have done, carrying on even after they had left the building. Steel gave Sapphire an amused look.

"You can stop doing that any time you like."

"I like the sound," she said, smiling at him. "It's a good sound."

"It's an annoying sound. You do know what you just did, don't you?"

"What we did," she corrected, her smile fading as she let the laughter die at last. "Yes. But it's worth it. You know that too, don't you?"

Steel sighed. "I suppose so. Although how he always talks us into these things, I have no idea. I think you let him charm you."

"Me?" Sapphire feigned offence but she was smiling again as she took Steel's arm. "I knew it would be my fault."

"Who else do I have to blame?"

This time, the laughter faded as the two people, arm in arm, disappeared from sight.




There is a Man from UNCLE fic to follow, but they're playing silly so-and-so's at the moment, so that story's on hold until they start to behave themselves.
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Date: 2007-03-07 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelliem.livejournal.com
Brava, well done! I hadn't thought of it before but Sapphire and Steel makes a perfect crossover for Torchwood, doesn't it?

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Date: 2007-03-07 03:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I can just imagine Steel getting seriously annoyed about the Rift - very messy and inconvenient ;)

Glad you enjoyed, thanks!
(great icon, btw)

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Date: 2007-03-07 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hellenebright.livejournal.com
I really like this. And you've got Joanna Lumley (Sapphire)'s voice exactly. Unfortunately for me (or David McCallum) Ducky Mallard in NCIS has managed to overlay Steel. I can only suppose Patsy is so different that she hasn't managed to do the same.

Very very nicely done - what happens when two agencies are both claiming jurisdiction.

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Date: 2007-03-07 04:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I know what you mean about the character voices. I also noticed that the NCIS prompt wasn't claimed and since I've got the Man from UNCLE prompt as well, maybe I should go for a hat trick...*fends off plot bunny with carrot*

Thanks! Glad it worked. :D

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Date: 2007-03-07 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] m31andy.livejournal.com
here from [livejournal.com profile] muncle.

Oh, that's good. And a really interesting idea. The S&S voices were perfect!

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Date: 2007-03-07 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! It went through about 80 different drafts, so am pleased I picked a plot that worked :D Glad you enjoyed.

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Date: 2007-03-07 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] matociquala.livejournal.com
Beautiful!

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Date: 2007-03-07 05:58 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2007-03-07 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nnwest.livejournal.com
Wow. I just watched S&S Assignment 2 on Saturday (first time viewing them), and the voices here are darned good! The cross works very well indeed.

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Date: 2007-03-07 05:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I'm spinning round on my computer chair here! I was soooooo worried about the voices, especially S&S and they seem to be the bit I hit best :D So glad you enjoyed :)

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Date: 2007-03-07 05:36 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] evil_plotbunny
This was marvellous. I'm in the middle of one of the S&S Big Finish audios and you got the voices perfectly.

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Date: 2007-03-07 06:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
[wonderful, wonderful icon, and so very true :D]

I only found out about the audiobooks today, so am going to start pestering my local library to get them. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this. Thanks!

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Date: 2007-03-07 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hazelayes.livejournal.com
Over here visiting from your rec in muncle. a fan of Jack Harkness and Steel as well as IK and NS i enjoyed your story immensely. It could have been a real episode of each/either, they blend so well. And talk about plot bunnies!!!! Your Joanna Lumley voice was _very_ good, and as I'm not so well versed in NCIS, your Steel was good too. I look forward to reading more of your stories with any of these characters in. :-)

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Date: 2007-03-07 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*blush* thanks! There's more Torchwood stories lurking round my journal (links are to your left ;)) but I was really nervous about S&S's voices. Clearly it works best when I let them do the talking and just write down what they say!

Glad you enjoyed :D

Let them do the talking

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Date: 2007-03-07 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crystalshard.livejournal.com
Ah, you posted! As I said earlier, fantastic crossover and the merging of the two fandoms works incredibly well.

The voices are spot-on, and the scenario just works. Thanks for posting this!

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Date: 2007-03-07 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! Apparently today is the day for overcoming nerves - I've finally sent something off to a real magazine for consideration *fingers crossed* so I couldn't not post this, could I?

Thanks for the help - I was so worried about the voices and apparently they're the part that worked best *shrug* I'm only the writer - what do I know? ;)

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Date: 2007-03-07 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laughingacademy.livejournal.com
Have you considered posting this at [livejournal.com profile] vintagemilitary?

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Date: 2007-03-07 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I hadn't, as I try to avoid spamming people who might get it on my f-list as well as 2 or 3 other places. But I'll trot over and have a look, thanks :D

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Date: 2007-03-07 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feenixandashes.livejournal.com
What a wonderful treat, combining two of three of my favourite fandoms. (other one being MfU)

Must be something to do with those great Time Agents especially Steel and Jack. wonderful read.

Lovely fic indeed :0)

Ren

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Date: 2007-03-08 06:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.

Torchwood/MfU to follow...

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Date: 2007-03-07 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kowarth.livejournal.com
Wonderful, i love the way you integrated Jack's drawn quality from the latter series stories.

I have too admit that i was a little dissapointed not to steal this prompt for myself. But i could never have as good a job with it!

and though everyone's commenting on the S&S voices from the series i have to offer potential blasphemy and tell you i think the voices work equally well for Big Finish Audio revivals too.

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Date: 2007-03-08 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you liked.

I haven't heard the BFA version, although I'm starting to think I need to...

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Date: 2007-03-07 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spastasmagoria.livejournal.com
oh another fantastic crossover. LOVE sapphire and steel and this was a great fun story to have both sets of characters in.

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Date: 2007-03-08 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! I certainly enjoyed myself. Glad you did too :)

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Date: 2007-03-08 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puritybrown.livejournal.com
Torchwood/S&S = BEST CROSSOVER EVER. And wow, you captured both fandoms so well -- captured Jack's furious empathy as well as Sapphire's quiet charm and Steel's brusqueness. Wonderful!

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Date: 2007-03-08 06:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
What a lovely review! Thanks so much - glad you enjoyed :)

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Date: 2007-03-08 10:45 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] melina123.livejournal.com
I only know the vaguest bit about S&S, but I got the idea! This is really lovely -- I love the connection via the characters in Out of Time. Thanks for sharing it!

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Date: 2007-03-10 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm really glad it worked even if you don't know S&S - glad you enjoyed :)

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Date: 2007-03-09 02:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com
I love that you wrote this, and it is excellent. I agree that you have the voices down perfectly, you even have Sapphire's mannerisms. Lovely.

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Date: 2007-03-09 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! I had a bit of panic over the characterisation, so am really glad it worked :D Glad you enjoyed.

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Date: 2007-03-09 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karaokegal.livejournal.com
Man From Uncle fic? Really? Ilya/Napolean? HMMOG, I haven't read that since this stuff was on paper! Hope the boys start cooperating. I'm sure it'll be a swinging "affair". "Go get em, Tiger".

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Date: 2007-03-10 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
*grin* thanks! It was "File 40" the MfU fanfic archive that got me interested in fanfic in the first place. The only problem is that the characters seem to have their own ideas of what they want to do. Every time I try to prod them, they prod back! ;)

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Date: 2007-03-10 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] benbenberi.livejournal.com
Very nice -- you've got the voices just right, and the S&S tone.

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Date: 2007-03-11 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starflower05.livejournal.com
Enjoyed this fanfic even though I gave up on Torchwood part way through the series lol.

S&S fanfic is rare so when I find any it's always good !

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Date: 2007-03-11 04:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! I confess to finding Jack as a character more interesting than Torchwood as a series, which is why all my stories end up about him :) So glad you enjoyed!

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Date: 2007-03-16 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeyk.livejournal.com
Argh! You didn't post a link on torchwoodgenfic, and see how long it took me to find this wonderful bit of fic?!?

Squee!!!!!!!!! Sapphire! Steel!!!!! Jack!!!!!!!!

I guess it was wrong of me to laugh uproariously at this?:

"I've got a good team," Jack said, standing up. "They wouldn't let me go that easily.

(not including the last few words, which is why I'm not putting the " at the end)

Poor, delusional Jack. *grin*

Damn, I love this fic.

Can't wait for "The Wandering Years" to start being posted, too. :)

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Date: 2007-03-17 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I guess it was wrong of me to laugh uproariously at this?
Possibly...I actually had in mind Owen ripping the world apart to get Jack and Tosh back. But now you come to mention it... :)

Thanks for the lovely comment - so glad you like. And sorry, but no sequel this time. I saw this sitting just before "Captain Jack Harkness", as a partial explanation of how Jack (and Tosh) slipped through the rift so easily. So for more, you'll just have to wait for The Wandering Years (in progress, I promise :))

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Date: 2007-03-16 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeyk.livejournal.com
Oh, and since it worked so well before, you don't mind if I start chanting, "Sequel! Sequel!! Sequel!!!" do you? *grin*

I'd love to see whatever deal Jack made explored some more, what are the consequences, and what happens now that he's much more susceptible to the Rift and what do the others do, when the Rift wants to throw him about in time, through it?
From: [identity profile] acciochocolate.livejournal.com
Great story! Fixes a plot hole very well. One can only hope that S&S took the lady pilot back to her own time.
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Hmmmm...I'm afraid I'm a little more pessimistic about Diane's fate, but I guess we'll never know ;) Thanks - glad you enjoyed!

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Date: 2007-04-01 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flurblewig.livejournal.com
Wonderful! Perfect blending of the shows, and a superb Sapphire voice. I could *see* this so well. Bravo!

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Date: 2007-04-01 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thank you! I tried it from all three perspectives, but hers was the only voice that worked. Glad you enjoyed :)

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Date: 2007-09-09 04:33 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] amaresu
Just stopping in to say that I really liked this. That's all.

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Date: 2007-09-09 06:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thank you! Much appreciated :)

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Date: 2007-11-08 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiccagirl24.livejournal.com
Briliant! Usually I think of how Illya and Jack would go well together, but it never occured to me to imagine Jack and Steel and Sapphire. You handled the blend beautifully. Well done!

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Date: 2007-11-09 07:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
Thanks! The characters responded to each other surprisingly well :) Glad you enjoyed.

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Date: 2008-02-09 02:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laligin.livejournal.com
Excuse me while I flail.

Originally I was going to come in here and say: Shadowbyrd and I watched the first Assignment of S&S last night, and I very much enjoyed it, so this was great fun. :)

And then I spotted the Man from UNCLE note. And got very very distracted. Because Yays! basically. (: I don't suppose you're a MacGyver fan as well, are you? Or would that be too far... ;)

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Date: 2008-02-09 08:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked S&S - there aren't nearly enough fans out there :)

*grin* I did used to watch MacGyver, actually, but it's been years...

Glad you liked the story!
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